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across town elizabeth was getting ready to pay a visit to her friend dontown...he may have some answers for her...at least that what she hoped for.wainting for his expartner to came out of the house was trying is patience,and he was not a patient man...inside the house max,kiss hiss wife one more time,before steeping out of the house,see you at 8?with another kiss they parted...max,walked to the car,already on pilot mode,he did not see the aproach coming...max...he turn around,for a moment,he thought he was seing a gost...no ,not  a gost just the impression of one,he had change if possible he had a colder look,the eyes that saw too much...what was he here for?max,did not even tried ti open the car door...he only ask where do you want me to meet you?max.always the same,my house 15minutes,and max,she looks ok...wrong so wrong...the firs man had been recruited...

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